How have we used our 100 words this week?

dylan week 23

As he read the death letter, some animals in the letter started appearing. All of a sudden they tried biting him. A few weeks later, the police arrived and found a dead body. The animals that killed the man were back and tried to take out the police. Blood trickled around the animals mouths. The animals retreated to the jungle. Another week passed and then the swot team came by to have a look. The animals tried taking out the base of the swot cars but it was too late. The swot team were already at the sofa. The animals started turning into humans. The leader ( Tiger), whose name was Martin garrix, was questioned by the police.

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elsie week 23

As I slowly strolled through the forest, there was a strange looking settee placed at the other of the forest. I cautiously walked towards the grey stone settee. As I finally sat, suddenly… I fell, CRASH!!!!! I went down, down, down a land with wine red blood splats dripping from every direction. Everything went black as if it was a power cut that never ended. Sweat was dripping down my for head as I woke as I realised it was a magical dream. I pinched myself hard and pierced my skin, blood trickled from my arm i squinted my eyes as I then realised It wasen’t a dream I was locked up in a room of stone talking settees throwing sharp knifes across the room.

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kierons 100 wc

A windy and stormy night Cosmic was roaming the old streets of the x and y war stood there a stone couch. Which had a million little men inside of it which had agreed that if a giant came they would form an army to make a giant. But Cosmic shrunk down to their size to reason with them and then darkrai showed up and started causing havoc everywhere just to get the lord of darkness to make everything dark and gloomy but Cosmic stopped him and saved the day but all is not well lurking in the shadows is DESTROYER

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Sloan 100wc week 23

Target: To use the correct punctuation

 

One late Monday night two men called Kieron and Sloan went on an adventure their hometown was abandoned… Until these hero’s had to save their hometown by finding the magic stone chair to stop Darth Vader and his apprentice Darth Maul. But in all of sudden a stone chair appeared out of no where and landed on Darth Mauls head. then Darth Vader laughed so loud Kieron went deaf. So they set off on an outstanding adventure but for some reason it seemed like minecraft if you looked at something there would be a black outline to it but it wouldn’t be a huge outline on it… It would be a cube big exactly like minecraft. But it turned out it was only a dream. But the stone chair wasn’t.

THE END!!!

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charlie d 100 wc week 23

people thought I had died when I got ebola. ( Ebola is a deadly virus/desise which is all over the world and were all gonna die from it!) but I got cured well nearly anyway

20 days later…

only got one day to go if they cant do anything in the next 24 hrs I will die….

23 hrs later I received the greatest news…

the docter said “ ive got the greatest news ever you are cured FROM EBOLA!” I was jumping to the stars. this was the greatest thing ever.

one year later he died on a hard stone sofa the end.

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Mya Week #23

TARGET: PUNCTUATION
One day there lived a man and a lady they lived in a cottage in the middle of nowhere. They went to a forest and found a stone statue. It looked like a sofa. They sat on it and it poked them on the bottom they thought it was a prickle. They jumped off and ran but the lady fell over and landed on her belly and she was pregnant . When she went to the hospital the baby was badly injured they thought that the baby was dead.

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alfie 100 wc week 23

My target is to use question marks correctly

Have you ever wanted an antique sofa with a creepy as hell stone dumb cat on the back? Well come down to the scary maze and prepare to get terrified MU HA HA HA. The scary maze has chasing pigs, murderous chimpanzees, rampaging anacondas and villainous vultures try survive by getting to the old stone sofa. The maze is complex people go in but not out the maze is as long as a football pitch and cannot ever beaten ,maybe you can?

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Mia 100wc week 23

100 word challenge week 23

Target: to try and finish my 100 word challenge
Once I went out to go for a walk and I saw a chair which was made out of stone and it had a cat on it aswell which was made out of stone aswell.I went over to the chair and I was going to sit on it but I changed my mind because I thought it looked a bit cold.I said to my friend Kieran “you go and sit on it.” He said ok. so he did.I went with him when I sat on it,it was very cold The End.

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dylan week 23

As he read the death letter, some animals in the letter started appearing. All of a sudden they tried biting him. A few weeks later, the police arrived and found a dead body. The animals that killed the man were back and tried to take out the police. Blood trickled around the animals mouths. The animals retreated to the jungle. Another week passed and then the swot team came by to have a look. The animals tried taking out the base of the swot cars but it was too late. The swot team were already at the sofa. The animals started turning into humans. The leader ( Tiger), whose name was Martin garrix, was questioned by the police.

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Ethan A 100wc week 23

Target: to use commas in my sentences

Once there lived a army of brave ,smart ,thoughtful and silly knights.These knights lived in a village mostly made out of really hard rock ,stone and iron. There job was to take care of there mean ,beastly ,enormous and fire breathing dragons from the great and powerful dragon god. One morning every knight in the castle was doing there dayly boring coras until the most precious rock couch gets blown to pieces the knights think “it must of been the dragon god during the night”. So the knights lost the plot and ferociously stabbed the dragon god until he was lifeless and won the fight!!!

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