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Aariz 100WC week 23

Once I saw a hard stone sofa in the park.The stone sofa was black,smooth and slipplery. Knowone has ever sat on it. People told me because if you sit on it you will go to this mysterious world.I was wondering if should I go there, but then I wondered if I would come back. I asked the people in the park but they didnt know so I just went. Then when I arrived there was a cow which was blue and the sky was red. The animals were talking and eating pizza and humans were eating grass!!!! Then suddenly it was raining poo!! I was so stinky! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! people went. What will happen next…..

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2 Responses to “Aariz 100WC week 23”

  1.   Mrs Fine (100WC Team) Says:

    Hi Aariz,
    Well done this week for a piece full of description. I like your description of the sofa, and how intriguing that no-one had ever sat on it. You have made a good job of using different sentence openers which makes it interesting for your readers, and you also draw them into your dilemma of whether to sit on the sofa or not. When you do, you turn the world around, using exclamation marks to help make your point. Be careful not to get too carried away with too much punctuation and silliness!

  2.   Fiona (Team 100WC) Says:

    Your story really did make me laugh, Aariz- you’ve used the prompt and your imagination to great effect in your 100WC. The raining poo made me laugh and squirm at the same time- yeuch! Don’t forget to check your spellings before you post- ‘knowone’ should be spelt ‘no one’. I liked your use of different adjectives in describing the sofa and you used the prompt well to craft an interesting story around it. Well done.
    Fiona (Team 100WC)

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