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Aariz week 21

Once I went to an castle which was sooooooo creepy. It was so silence. The silence was defining. It was also so pitch black that I couldn’t see. Then I heard a sound coming towards me, I was so terrified but I believed in myself and went towards the ghost. Suddenly I heard a scream aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! So I ran where I heard it from and it was upstairs so I ran. It was person who was about to get stabbed and die. So I got the knife of him and wack stab punch kick and killed him! I was happy.

Posted by on February 9th, 2015 at 2:04 pm and tagged ,  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)

One Response to “Aariz week 21”

  1.   Miss Hosmer (Team 100) Says:

    Well done Aariz! You tried hard to build up the tension at the start of your story, and I like your sentence openers, especially suddenly. I also liked your language, like believed and pitch-black. Well done and keep writing!!

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