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Bridget’s 100 word challenge #week 23

100 word challenge #week 23

Target: More variety in how my sentences start

 

No cloud in sight, sunshine was finally beaming down from above so I decided to go for a walk. While on my way I passed an ancient graveyard.I trembled closer and suddenly stumbled across a hole in the ground. Down, down, down I fell, I hit the ground.Struggling to keep my eyes open I rose to attention.I became closer to a door wondering what was inside I slammed the door open. Inside was purely a land of imagination, a world of stone. Then I found myself on a sofa made of stone …

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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3 Responses to “Bridget’s 100 word challenge #week 23”

  1.   Mr G, Sheffield, UK (Team 100WC) Says:

    What a very interesting opening Bridget. You really don’t expect such an adventure to begin from such an ordinary, pleasant day. I guess including a graveyard was a bit of clue that ‘things’ were about to happen. I wonder if everything in the imaginary land was made of stone? Living things too?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

  2.   Mrs DW Team 100 Says:

    Bridget

    Thank you for sharing your story with us, you hit the target really well, each sentence was well crafted .

    Make sure that the sentances actually flow together to make the story read easier.

    Great job.

  3.   Fiona (Team 100WC) Says:

    I absolutely loved your opening sentence- it drew me in to your story immediately. By the end I was left wanting more, because you crafted a lovely story opener and I was disappointed when it came to an end. Great work- keep it up.
    Fiona (Team 100WC)

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