How have we used our 100 words this week?

By Sloan# week 6

In a dark and spooky forest I saw a troll with to swords, forty throwing knives he also had a gravity hammer. The troll had a giant lunge a me with a roman long sword in his hands. I had no choice but to stomp on the floor it made both me and the troll blind because two stones flicked up in mine and the troll’s face… IT MADE US BLIND!!!!!!!!!!!!
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!,” screamed Clayton Carmine…
Then I lost my vision. But it cost £30 pound for a operation so I booked a appointment. Suddenly I was able to see again.

Posted by on October 11th, 2014 at 3:00 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)




2 Responses to “By Sloan# week 6”

  1.   Mrs Skinner (Team 100) Bristol UK Says:

    Hi Sloan!
    This is a very dramatic story and I like the way you described how you lost your sight. I think the actual prompt had to be popped in quickly and it doesn’t really fit which is such a shame. I think you could make your writing even better if you had a plan of what you want to write about before you start. Have a go & I hope you will join 100WC again.

  2.   sloan Says:

    thanks!:)

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