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The Magic Mirror By Megan 4bl

One gloomy night, a brave boy called Joey entered the castle of mysteries. Joey  looked around the spooky castle until he noticed a crystal mirror, which had lots of arty things like oil pastels and very expensive paints around it. The room started  spinning around and around   until the mirror smashed  ” Oh no!” Joey started picking up the crystal mirror  pieces as quick as he could ” Oh no Oh no Oh noooooo!” Joey found some glue and started to glue the crystal pieces together   and eventually  managed to fix the mirror in time for supper at Lilys house. 

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A magical world By Ellie mae

One gloomy night, three children found them selfs in a magical world full of  fierce and gooey monsters.Suddenly  Ben found this dark place which had never ever  been seen before .Ben shouted “Molly Lisa look at this.” He found a art gallery with bright paint,pencles and a blank piece  of paper just sitting there waiting to be painted on.

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paint,paint and more paint.T.S 100 wc rjs

Me and my friend Jem were at the Dominos pizza parlour when I heard a strange noise coming towards us so I ran down the street,up the road and jumped into the dustbin with Jem and hid their until there was no noise! When all was silent I got out of the bin and fell down this hole!When I esculated to the bottom there was no sign of Jem so i carried on down on this funny corridoor to find my way out of this place I went into this room and saw loads of art equiptment so I sat down and had a rest.

 

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Jem.J 100WC

I’m Jeff and this is Bob. Bob can’t speek so I’m talking insted.

It was the most mysteares thing you’ve ever seen.   The site of it nearly blined me.   We couldn’t beleev the amount of paint.   Then there was a funny noise: tttrruuuuuuuuummmppppp!!!!!!! and some-one said “that was not ment to happen, HONESTLY!”

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riley c Wc

Once apon a time there was a little girl named annie.her dream was to become a artist but she was really good at gymnastics a thew years later when she was older her mum said “why don’t you combind your tallents together and be a amazing artist.”so she was older and then she sighned up also on the first day of work she walked into the room and she was stunned by the malticouloured paints she shouted  WOW   THIS IS AMAZING she picked up 24 diffirent paints flipped over the coberd and through pains at the blank canvas thay all walked in and got blown away.

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Terror Party by Megan 4bl

I was having the time of my life at the hectic Christmas  party until I herd a booming sound coming from the chimney. “Boom!, Boom!”. Then  suddenly all of the crazy noise stopped… As soon as I turned around  a mystical  creature fell down the chimney, terrifying all of my friends. It was an Evil version of Santa, a very Evil Santa. Before we could run out the door Evil Santa locked us in .  I noticed one escape. ” Santa do you like cookies?” I said. He nodded  as he walked to the kitchen. I told all of my friends go up stairs and climb out of my window. We all went over to  my friend lewis’s house and fogot all about Evil Santa.

 

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The disco by Aaliyah 4a

There was a school disco going on in east high every-one was excited for the school disco it was the day for the school disco.Then a man wanted to go but he was not allowed because he had a detection for play fighting.Now it was the disco every-one was having the time of there lives.Then it all went silent and the DJ stopped playing music suddnly a ghost came in through the walls every-one was scared before we could get out the doors he shut it…

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100 wc

A long time ago on halloween night a young boy Joey had a dream to be a knight and defeat the Ender Dragon. The Ender Dragon is black and no one has defeated it or suvived.Joey was very detirmend so that halloween he asked his mum if he could “mum can I go trick or treeting now.”Joey remeember the magic word ,it is…” .”Please yes I know!”And then Joey went to the End Portal, jumped in and then the noise of the streets stopped. Joey then saw the Ender Dragon flying around so he swallowed his fear and shot the Dragon and no one was sad  also Joey b ecame a knight

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slenders game t.s 4bl year 4 100 wc

do you ever get nightmares from bogeyman,jeff the killer,bloody mary and zombies all these things don’t scare babies so stop acting like a 7 year old im slender man I have many abilities my favoriute one is if you look at me in the eye you will die i have black ropes coming out of my back that help me catch you i can also teleport my beastly friends are bloody mary jeff the killer and bogey and zombie i live in the woods to catch little kids and scare them while there on my property im the king of the woods i like to scare alot and drink blood all night so boommmmmmmmmmmmmmm then the noise stops.

 

 

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Then the noise stops 100 w c ashleyr

The day befor christmas my wife said to me one pink phone was ringing then the noise stoped a evil tennis racket took my wife i turned into to super man. The next day a tennis ball then a keyboard came from a evil desert the tennis ball came from a village. The day of christmas my wife said to me two ducks turned the fater than a school i turned to iron man and then shot them with a laser beam. On boxing day my wife said to me three pigs turned to famous pink dolls i ripped there heart out of there sholders. i fell into captian bugers command then killed every one in town. One very gloomy mistiryous dark day then captian burger desided to kill every one who’s alive i turne to hulk and protected the people. Then the next day a baby was born i started to really protect them from the evil captian burger.

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Megank 4a

Over the hills and up north, where the silky snow lay  is a little town full of tiny houses and a big pub which is good for a laugh and a drink when you have had a bad day.Santa lives there with his naughty elves it was choas.

one day santa walked while the elves were having a party and as soon as he did the noise stopped.

 

 

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Emily 4a wc The witch

A    little  girl  called   Rebecca   was    opening   her  birthday   presents   and  when  mum   cried   out   “do  you  want  a   birthday  party    Rebecca?”     “yes  please”   said   Rebecca  exciedly.   When  it  was  Rebecca’s  party   a   good    looking   witch  called   skylar    was  here  to   trash  Rebecca’s    party    and    then  the  noise   stopped  when  skylar   warked   in.

 

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The hammering

One day two people went to a secret lab when mision went wrong and this is were thay ended up.

thay had just ran through the main entance to the lab but most of the creatches had got out and were looking at them piosen comming out there mouths they ran faster and faster to the controle room.One off the monsters ripped kelly`s dress but thay made it in time.Thay look to each other tom siad ” were safe now  and i`ve only necently descoved this but i love you.” just as he said thous words he heard a hammering niose on the door and it got louder and louder and then the noise stopped.just as thay went to kiss, the creatchers came crashing through the window…

 

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The monster party

One day  there lived a vampia who has eval powers and also has red eyes. The bright red eyes have mean powers that can change the people good to bad. Suddenly a football team arived  at the vampia’s house. They didn’t know that it was the vampia’s house then the vampia saw them. So the vampia looked at them deep into the eyes and ternd them into bad. ‘YES’ said the vampia in a low voise. Then they flew a monster party , evryone was there  sussenly in a blink of an eye the vampia and the football team arived at the party . Then the vampia and the football team looked  deep into there eyes and they ternd bad , the vampia was happy

 

THE END

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on christmas eve

on christmas eve 12 sasuages jumping 11 choclate cakes swinging 10 buoncing birds 9 chickins running. 8 smelly feet  7 big gorillas 6 elephants crashing 5 shops  singing. 4 smelly pens .

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The halloween party

A long time ago at a halloween party a curse spreded all around the city.I will tell you how it happend once upon a time there was a scientist who lived in a burned down house.He tryed to make a potion that made every one good but it did”nt turn out well.Unfortunately who ever  drank it turned very angry and vilant.Back to the halloween party i saw my mum drink the potion she shouted at me and went over to my dad.AND THEN THE NOISE STOPPED……

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Erin, 6t

 

Slowly and silently, sadly and sorrowfully, I will always remember my dad. The way we used to play in the garden and spay mum with the hose pipe. Destroyed. My mum will never be the same. Never smile, never scream, he will always sit in silence. Why? Our whole life has been smashed into 1000 pieces of pain. Laughing turns into crying, smiling turns into frowning, where have all the good times gone?

And here I am now who my dad was and who he is. Tears run down my eyes for you dad. It would all be different, dad, look at us now.

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Jem! 4BL week 11

REMEMBERING

  • R~Red poppies to remember by.
  • E~Everyone remembers the soldiers who died in the tragic wars.
  • M~Mayhem in the times when familes were destroied.
  • E~Even my Great Grandad remembers when it happened.
  • M~Millions of people did die but we still claimed victory.
  • B~Bombs that bombed our cities.
  • E~Every year we stand silent to remember those who risked their lives for us.
  • R~Royalty. Our heroes should be treated like royalty.
  • I~If they hadn’t done what they did, where would we be now?
  • N~Never forget 11th November when the silence happens.
  • G~Glad, I’m glad that we remember every year.
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Riley c 4a week 11

Rember my name  my name states clar rileyit is  ill allways be near.Rember,rember the 4th of november it is my birthday im going on holiday but it’s far away I wont be near.as my dad calls me Islide down the opersit of the stairs.ops I say and dad says “what have you forgot something”I wiz up the stairs and I say uuuuuuuummm oh no I have forgoten. All of this rembering has turnt into forgetfullness.I slowly walked down the stairs say yes I have remberd I say havent forgot anything dad says yes we get in the car and befor not long we are there at holiday Isay oh no some one was ringing me …                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               REMBER REMBER

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Aaliyah that sad story week 11.

Remembering that sad day I stoud out in the cold weather but I was happy because I was going to school also I had a littli bird and her name was sunshine.She was pet she alway’s came home put my stuff down and ran up stair’s and went to my room my sister alway’s followed me she came and helped me feed her.I alway’s did the same but one day it all seem qiet I put my stuff down slowly and walked up the stair’s slowly and went to my room and I put my head throw the so qietly.I was shocked with sadness I was so sad I went running down stair’s and jumped into my mummy’s arm’s because sunshine had died because she had got to that age so as you could see I was sad and this would happen to you some day.

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molly 4bl week11

Long long ago there stood a cottage in a great huge forest and a girl lived there and her name was Julie-ann[annie]. And her job was to go to peoples houses and do their housework for them.When the job was done she used to skive in the barns and talk to her only friend and his name was william and when they grew up they got married and not long after that Annie had her first baby Edward and now she was Mrs Annie Souls .After Edward was born Annie had a another son who was Walter  and not long after that she had another son who was david and then she had twins andrew and Justin and finally Percy and then she had a girl Katy and then Hilder and when the 6 boys grew up they were in war and died and then Hilder ran away .

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skylar 4a week 11

Larg was a viking he was a forgeter he always puts on his trousers and says”hay were have thay gone” but  there was a bad side to this he lived nere a cliff by him self with no one to say “STOP THE CLIFF larg,” he was a lonley but maneged to live his life happy.He got up every morning and rode a dinosar to work . He tested out the rocks in the boxes to make sure thay were round he didn`t know why he had to keep them round .One day he met a girl thay became good friend and had a baby he was so happy he did a dance write next to the cliff he slipped on a rock and he fell his wife and daughter always remembered him and sang every night i love you.

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levi week 11

One day I wen’t to school and my mum said to me “don’t forget your stuff ” “I won’t mum” the little girl said. Then she skipped of to school. When she got to school her teacher asked her if she had her home work she said “i’ll go see if  i’ve got it in my coat pocket” she walked to the cloak room suddenly it wasn’t there then she freezed. My mum told me to remember my stuff her teacher came looking for her ,she was on the floor crying her teacher siad “what’s wrong darlin” said her teacher “my mum told me to remember my stuff” said the little girl .

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Rebecca’s christmas eve week 11

One everning me and my mum were wrapping christmas presents for my dog, my brother and also my dad. On desember the 24th, my family put the christmas tree in the corner off the livingroom. After when we put the ruff christmas tree up in the corner, we went to bed but I just remberd that we didn’t decerate the tree so I rushed to my mum and I told her ‘we didn’t decerate the tree’ ‘oh yes’ said mum in a soft voise. So we decerated the tree with glitery tinsel and ballball’s. After we decerated the tree, at the end I put the gold star on top then we all went to bed.

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Ellie mae week 11

It was the 2 month at school and i know i forgot something what was it…it was my pencle case.With my favirate pencle in and that pencle felt just right in my hands.My favirate rubber that worked perfectly amazing.My teacher said”Ellie mae were is your pencle”

“Are you not rembering your pencle case again”said the teacher.I ran out of the class room and was crying because i thought i was going to be in trubble.My teacher came out and said “no need to cry your not in trubble.”She gave me a card with a picture on it the picture was a pencle case.

 

REMBER……..REMBER

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Megan 4bl week 11

As I stared out of my window my step dad came to tell me I was late for my meeting at the  hoilday club. “You must rember Megan this meeting is important.” At the hoiladay club we had to remeber anyone that has died in our family. Callum shouted ” My dad, my dad he tragicly died in the army! But he wasn’t in World war 1 or 2 though” The leader told us they didn’t  have to be in World war or the army. They could be any one in our family. I thought for a long time then sighed”My dad  got murded by a mean cruel  man” I started to cry I never really new him. I wish I had known him though. I miss him lots.

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cleo 4a week 11

There was a girl who could never remember, her name was daisy. Daisy had one wish that wish was that she could remeber.daisy talked to friends about the disco her friend said “parden” and daisy forgot.at the time of the disco ,Daisy forgot where her ticet   was  .also daisy  was still in her pjs .

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the scared wizard

one day there was a scared wizard that didn’t have any magic. The wizard wanted to be trained so he could be a real wizard when the sky got darker he asked his mum if he could be trained his mum said yes so he went to Hogwarts and he went to dumdwarf and said can you train me please and he said yes he went to bed at Hogwarts and met Ryan who turned out to be his long lost brother he said “hello bro” the wizard called peter “who are you and what do you want” Ryan said ” it’s me your brother” …
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The hungry wizard

The funny wizard made a huge spell so he got his big black cauldron, which was under the stairs. When he got it out he took it to the over grown garden, he got some frogs legs and a banana, a bouncy red ball, some salt and pepper to make it taste nice.Then he then added some water to the mixture. He picked up his magic wand and said ABRA CADABRA make me something to eat.
He waved his wand and there was a big orange explosion. He looked down and running down the pavement was his tea. The wizard run after it and was never seen again…..

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the circus act

Up upon a hill there was a funny circus there best colour is orange. On the hills is a pavement is maybe it is a waved shape. On the way there I stopped and I looked down I should of took my family with me so I turned around and went running back as fast as I could because I didn’t want to miss they act . But on the way I saw a really slow tortoise slower than ever I couldn’t believe it so I picked it up and ran to the circus and back to my house again.

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