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chelsea week 20

It was on a friday night i was so happy because i am going climbing on the biggest mountain with my dad .They call my dad Mr miserable. It was the day to go climbing. When we got there the mountain was really grey.It started to rain but we sill want to go climbing. When we got to the top, we sow a shadow ,it was a hyena.wayed to the side.So he died when we got down, we jumped in the car and went home and never come back.
It was terffiying ! The hyena look me in the eye .It started to chase me. So i got my sandwich so we stopped to eat. When we were half way down i cut my knee. I saw the hyena and he jumped to get me but i s

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 2:28 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (3)

3 Responses to “chelsea week 20”

  1.   Catherine Says:

    Good job! A few spelling errors though, so maybe have someone check before you post.

  2.   Riya Says:

    I like the way you made it funn that your dad is called mr misrreble
    You could add some capital lettes and punchuation.
    Have you ever been climbing

  3.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Wow, what an adventure! I also like your nickname for your dad – a very clever use of one of the prompt words! It looks as if your story is slightly out of order and not finished, so make sure you check your 100WC before posting online. You describe the terrifying experience really well.
    Keep up the good writing!
    Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg

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