How have we used our 100 words this week?

Chloe H 100wc

As the sun shone in his room onto his face, he knew the day would be just outstanding. He got out his small bed he got dressed and wore blue skinny jeans and a light blue top. He was on his went to the kitchen to have breakfast he had toast with butter on. Then he went to school then he saw a big shadow right in front of him it was a tall,skinny and angry man at in a flash. He took Charlie outside of a factory. It looked like chocolate. He went inside…

Posted by on September 16th, 2016 at 10:45 am and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)

2 Responses to “Chloe H 100wc”

  1.   April Says:

    Oustanding very good word 😉 flash 🙂 I think you should change .Then he went to school take out the then and change it to an and then put the full stop after the school

  2.   porcha Says:

    so go chole

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