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DAISY week 18

Yay! It’s Friday and it’s my birthday and I’m having a party and 10 of my friends are coming. There will be lots of food and fizzy drink and the most important thing is…the swimming pool in my backyard .2 hours later… I whispered ”Mum everyone is here and you haven’t set up the pool
“I have another thing in my mind how about a guess what’s in the box game as we’re going to have a lot of rain”
“Mum that sounds like a fantastic idea lets go and find some thing’s to put in the boxes 30 minutes later!
I shouted ”mummy can we bring down the boxes for our game please I whispered”yes”
I put my hands in the box and in my head I was thinking what was that I could feel?it was a ….puppy I said”thank you soo much”
and we all ate lots of food.

Posted by on January 19th, 2015 at 2:31 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)




One Response to “DAISY week 18”

  1.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Daisy,
    What a great story! I love how your story progressed and how you used the game as a double surprise for your reader and character. You’ve used some excellent speaking verbs to keep your writing interesting, too. Well done!
    Laura A, Team100, Luxmebourg

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