How have we used our 100 words this week?

DAISY WEEK 20

Target:spaces and capital

I decided to go to the Zoo with my mum and dad.We had a disgusting sandwich which had lettuce in like how gross I hate healthy stuff.I found a grey Hyena and I tried to climb its cage it was so miserable. My mum loves Hyenas because they laugh a lot and they’re so cute.My dads favorite animal is the monkeys because they are cheeky.But I love my dolphins and there is no dolphins at the Zoo. I wish there where dolphins I love the way they whine.

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 2:07 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (4)




4 Responses to “DAISY WEEK 20”

  1.   Miss Anand Team100WC London Says:

    Well done Daisy, I like the way you included most of the prompt. I love lettuce in my sandwiches.
    Keep rising to the challenge.
    Miss A
    London

  2.   Mrs. Vreeland @ Team 100 NJ USA Says:

    Great job using the prompt this week. You did used the words in a creative manner and you stayed on topic. Keep up the good work. Remember, spaces after end marks.

  3.   Fiona (Team 100WC) Says:

    This was a really good attempt at this week’s 100WC; I thought the task was quite tricky this week. I liked the way you described everyone’s favourite animal and you made me smile by complaining about the sandwich. Good work.
    Fiona (Team 100WC)

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