How have we used our 100 words this week?

Daisy Week 21

Target:spaces and capitals
It was one cold and misty night when there was a power cut throughout the whole city, the electrician banged on our front door and laughed a nasty,evil laugh.Me and my friends ran up stairs because the sound of the nasty,evil laugh was deafining.It became silent and that was a good sign but that silence was deafining.Oh no Mr Pygot walked through the door me and saffron hid under my quilt and said “hide our litracy books.He said “have you got any more of those cupcakes you had on your birthday you said I could have another one saffron said “ I had my fingers crossed and It was mr harrisons cupcake.Mr pygot said “well it was mine because it was on my desk”.

Posted by on February 9th, 2015 at 2:02 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)




2 Responses to “Daisy Week 21”

  1.   Mr Addison Says:

    Target: Speech punctuation.
    Remember to start speech with a capital letter and to put inverted commas around what is being said.

    He said “have you got any more of those cupcakes you had on your birthday you said I could have another one

    Should be:

    He said, “Have you got any more of those cupcakes you had on your birthday? You said I could have another one.”

    I like the description of the laugh. It makes it sound spooky.

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