How have we used our 100 words this week?

elizabeth 100WCweek 21

Laying in a hospital bed staring at the door that was wide open, every window was locked and every outside door wasn’t open. Then my door slammed shut. I screamed with horror and hid under my blankets. When I came out from under my cover and gasped for air, I saw a scary face pop up in front of me. The silence was deafening. Then I tried to scream but I couldn’t. My room had a black out and went pitch black and the door creaked open then something else walked through suddenly I a heard scream. “hello” I said.


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One Response to “elizabeth 100WCweek 21”

  1.   Gerry Button 100 wc team Says:

    Hi Elizabeth, thank you for your entry this week, I enjoyed reading it. You made good use of the prompt and your story had fluency. I can’t believe how calm you were, I was shaking reading it! Maybe think of using a cliffhanger next time but keep it up.

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