How have we used our 100 words this week?

Ethan A 100wc week 21

Target: punctuation

There once was a famous thief named Jermaine grekon (a.k.a the shadow.) One day whilst he was in the school playground he decided to rob a small infants buzz lightyear toy. He slowly walked up behind the boy and snatched it out of his hands. The playground went quiet. The silence was deafening as everyone was wondering what had happened. Jermaine had got away with it again. This was because the child was too scared to tell anyone because he was worried that the shadow would come back and steal more of his toys. Will his nightmare come true?…

Posted by on February 9th, 2015 at 2:10 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)

2 Responses to “Ethan A 100wc week 21”

  1.   Mr Addison Says:

    You have thought about your punctuation and you have used full stops and a question mark. I wonder if next week you could think about using commas to separate clauses in sentences.

  2.   raccoons Says:

    ok ill try my best!

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