How have we used our 100 words this week?

harry r week 21

Target: full stops

…The silence was deafening…
Week 21
I’m in the hot Sahara desert and I have had no drinks for 21 days so my frowet is stinging. I’m getting weaker and weaker so can someone get me some water before i
dying. In the distance i can see a house{running running} I finally arrived at the house now knocking on the door.I heard people scream then it went silent the silence was deafening so then I heard some one full down the stairs and the door sprung open and i heard a harsh voice…

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One Response to “harry r week 21”

  1.   Mr Addison Says:

    There are some good ideas in here. I like the description of your throat stinging after missing out on water.
    Please make sure you re-read your work before submitting it.

    Does this make sense: I’m getting weaker and weaker so can someone get me some water before i
    dying.

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