How have we used our 100 words this week?

jessica.p

As I was walking back from my nans house I bumped into this neon brightly coloured settee with a dark pink cat on the top that had a gap in it so you could see what was in there. I strolled closer and closer to it and the top of the cat flung open. Lying inside there was a bright red button. Underneath my feet was a slippery piece of ice. As I walked forward I slipped and fell on this button and these little gremlin’s came and lifted me into this whole in the settee and I was never seen again…

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2 Responses to “jessica.p”

  1.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Jessica,
    I love how you have given lots of colour to your 100WC story. I also like how your story starts off innocently and then you reveal the hidden powers of the button and the settee. It becomes quite scary in the end! I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work.
    Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg

  2.   Helen Whittaker (team 100WC) Says:

    Your 100WC this week is a well written story Jessica. A simple settee but. such a cunning trap. You’ve chosen a good range of vocabulary and punctuated well. I particularly like your sentence ‘I strolled closer and closer…’ as I wanted to know what happened.
    You could write a series of stories where people disappear into the settee!

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