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Jessica .p

on Saturday afternoon shayla went out with her best friend Jessica to a wildlife park. Before they went, they stopped off to get a sandwich because shayla was hungry . on there way to the wildlife park Jessica saw a mountain and Jessica thought it would be funny to climb over the mountain and see what’s over the other side.on the way up shayla was really miserable . when they reached the top they ran down because they realized that over the other side was the wildlife park that they were supposed to go to. they saw some thing moving at the bottom of the hill so they went over there to have a look. shayla got very close and as Jess went to touch it, shayla shouted HYENA!!!!!!! Jess turned around and ran back up the hill with shayla trailing up behind her then…

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 2:27 pm and tagged ,  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)




One Response to “Jessica .p”

  1.   Ms. Sargent Team 100WC-USA Says:

    Hi Jessica,

    I liked the way you developed your story. It was easy to follow and interesting to read. Jess must have been quite surprised to find a hyena. No wonder she ran back up the mountain.

    Once you finish writing, you might want to read it over and make sure your sentences and the names of people all begin with capital letters.

    Ms. Sargent
    Team 100WC–USA

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