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josh’s 100 word challenge

Years ago in a ghost town children telling each other story’s. Shining the light above his face the light was so bright that it shone the hole room. But one night  it all went wrong. One night telling each other spooky story’s something spooky happened while telling story’s  someone crept up upon the children BOO!!!!!! . The children freaked out and screamed…

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2 Responses to “josh’s 100 word challenge”

  1.   Mrs. Peterson (Team 100wc) Says:

    Josh, great idea for using the bright light as a spooky story is being told. I like it! Do you have enough words left that you could add some more detail to your story? Perhaps tell a little of who the main character is or who the one saying “Boo!” turns out to be.

    Mrs. Peterson
    Texas, USA

  2.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Josh,
    I wonder what scared them all?! I like how you use the prompt in this scary story and how your sentence “But one night it all went wrong” leads to the main action of your piece. You’ve also used some good verbs such as creep, freak out and scream. Good job!
    Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg

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