How have we used our 100 words this week?

kai week 21

Hi its me again but this time were still inside syria’s prison. Were all kicking the bars and pulling on them, until a grenade rolled in and we all walked back. We felt our backs hit the wall it followed us is was a deafening silence then the grenade went pop it didn’t even make a loud sound I was relieved.I’ll see you next time if you read my next one.

Posted by on February 9th, 2015 at 2:03 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)

2 Responses to “kai week 21”

  1.   Mr Addison Says:

    Target: Apostrophes for contraction
    it is = it’s
    we are = we’re

    There are some good ideas in this, but it is quite short. I think that you could achieve more in the time provided.

  2.   raccoons Says:

    ok sir 🙂

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