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Katherine’s 100 WC week 20

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katherine`s 100 word challenge week 20

 

I was climbing up a hill with my best friend kiera she was miserable ALL the way up and ALL the way down. SO at the bottom I offered her a sandwich but she was still grey so we started to walk home until it started to pour down with rain so I said a joke and she started laughing like a hyena so it was the best/worst day ever

 

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 3:54 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (4)




4 Responses to “Katherine’s 100 WC week 20”

  1.   Ms Woodgate (Team 100WC) Maidstone, Kent.UK Says:

    Hello Katherine,

    Well done for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge. You have included your words very well into your story, they were certainly a tricky bunch! I like the way you used a simile and some lovely word choices.
    Remember you can use 100 words, make the most of that and include more description and details. I would like to have known more about the mountain you were climbing and something about your friend.
    Keep up the good work.

  2.   (Butter Rocks Says:

    I like how you said that your friend was miserable that that it was annoying but next time you should put a period at the end of your story and YOU SHOULDHAVE 100 WORDS.

  3.   bears Says:

    Kate it’s me Kiera you are my best friend ever

  4.   Islay Says:

    Sounds like you had fun writing this. Watch how you write–Capital letters for names. The sentences are a bit long. You only have two sentences. Kiera ia my grandaughter’s name.

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