How have we used our 100 words this week?

Katherine`s week 19

week 19

I was in my room and I was decorating my wall in my bedroom and suddenly there was a bang! So I turned around and there was a man, holding a gun to someone’s head and saying “Give me your money”. The victim replied “no!” as he struggled to get away. So the man pulled the trigger, and the victim fell to the floor like a sack of potatoes. The man stole all his money and belongings, and ran off. A police car came speeding down the road,with its light flashing so thats all I saw.

Posted by on January 26th, 2015 at 2:20 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)

One Response to “Katherine`s week 19”

  1.   Bridget Says:

    AMAZING!!! it bulids up loads of suspence and i was like what gonna happen next x anyway an amazing peice of work x Target : more powerful verbs x it was EPIC!!!

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