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Kyle 100wc Week#20

There once was an African tribal warrior named Rashida. One day he saw some tourists eating sandwiches and decided to watch them from a tree. Rashida always looked miserable because he had broken his jaw when trying to climb a tree when he was young. Suddenly he saw a grey shadow lurking over the tourists. Then, a hyena growled maliciously and struck at one of the tourists. Instantly, Rashida reacted. He leapt down from the tree and stabbed the hyena in the heart. Now it wasn’t laughing. After a few thanks the tourists left and Rashida returned once more to his tree.

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 2:08 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (3)




3 Responses to “Kyle 100wc Week#20”

  1.   Catherine Says:

    This is a great story. Good job!

  2.   Lia y4 Says:

    I like your story. It is really good. check out my classes blogs at http://kidblog.org/MissSpeddingsYear4Class

  3.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Kyle,
    I REALLY enjoyed this 100WC story and you have used the prompt words in a very clever way. You story is complete and you used some wonderful descriptive words (I love “growled maliciously”). The sentence “Now it wasn’t laughing” also made me smile. Well done on an intelligent piece of creative writing.
    Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg

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