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leanne mill 100 word challenge week 23

LIVE NEWS
This morning a discovery was made when twenty year old Ely from north London found a mysterious black, old sofa on the side of a wood. Only 100 meters away from the town’s site, people have been told to stay away from this discovery for health and safety. While crowds are being controlled by police, scientists are working out why and how this black, weird and dangerous sofa arrived . Just to add, they have found a black stone figure on the right hand side of the coach. As soon as the scientists have found out more about this strange mystery we will let the public know.

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2 Responses to “leanne mill 100 word challenge week 23”

  1.   Mrs Tucker (100WC Team) Says:

    Hi Leanne,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us, there were almost 2000 entries this week!
    What I like about your writing…
    * You have written a news report, I haven’t come across any others, they tend to all be narrative.
    * You have also used lots of description to bring your writing to life for your readers.
    I’m recommending your work for the special showcase this week. Fingers crossed! 🙂
    Well done and keep writing. 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK.

  2.   Team100WC Jackie Says:

    What a great idea to use the prompt to create a news item Leanne. If I heard this on the radio or TV, or read it online or in a newspaper, I would certainly sit up and take notice. Do you think it would read easier if you re-crafted your first two sentences?
    ‘This morning a discovery was made when twenty year old Ely from north London found a mysterious black, old sofa on the side of a wood only 100 meters away from the town’s site.’
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie
    New Plymouth
    New Zealand

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