How have we used our 100 words this week?

Lucy 100 wc

In the freaky forest there lived a boy called mason and a girl named Lexi and they loved. They went everywhere together including the Swimming pool. As they walked through the forest the trees opened up and the light was so bright mason stared up at the bright light. It nearly blinded him it was so bright.

Posted by on January 16th, 2015 at 2:44 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)




2 Responses to “Lucy 100 wc”

  1.   Fiona (Team 100WC) Says:

    I liked your name for the forest and alliteration (starting words with the same letter or sound)makes it more interesting and draws attention to it. I enjoyed reading your work, but I wish there was more of it! Don’t forget capital letters for names. Good work- well done.
    Fiona (Team 100WC)

  2.   Mrs Tighe (100WC Team) Says:

    You have some good ideas in your writing Lucy. I like how you describe the trees opening up, it gives the reader a clear picture of what is happening. Make sure you use capital letters for names though. Thank you for taking the time to do this weeks challenge.

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