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Megank 4a

Over the hills and up north, where the silky snow lay  is a little town full of tiny houses and a big pub which is good for a laugh and a drink when you have had a bad day.Santa lives there with his naughty elves it was choas.

one day santa walked while the elves were having a party and as soon as he did the noise stopped.



Posted by on December 8th, 2013 at 8:59 am and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (2)

2 Responses to “Megank 4a”

  1.   MRS DW TEAM 100 -Torquay UK Says:

    I would like to have seen your story develop a little more about how the party started to why there was a noise. But I love the link to Christmas, I can see what you are excited about.

    Well done.

  2.   lucy and bowe Says:

    it is good

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