How have we used our 100 words this week?

mya week 20

target: to make it make sense

I decided to go to the Zoo with my little sister Levi, her friend Lily and her mum. We went to the hyena cage and we ate our sandwich and it was a grey hyena. As we ate our lunch the hyena climbed up a rock. After we went to the penguins habitat. It was so miserable that i tried to run away to see the tigers habitat. Finally they found me with my best friend Elsie at the giraffes habitat. Then when we went home we all had pizza.

Posted by on February 2nd, 2015 at 2:15 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (3)

3 Responses to “mya week 20”

  1.   Tonya (100WC USA) Says:

    This was a cute little tale. It made me hungry for pizza. Be careful of punctuation. Keep on writing!

  2.   Kauanoe RIllon Says:

    Hey Mya! I really loved your story! great use of the words. I hope to hear more from you.

    Kauanoe RIllon (Honolulu, Hawaii)

  3.   Dr D - Team100WC, Derby, England Says:

    Thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. This is a well written piece based on some tricky keywords – well done. I enjoyed reading this and they style of your writing was pleasing – I wanted to have more to read! Keep writing 🙂

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