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Ronnie F 100wc

As charlie ,grandpa joe and mr Wonka entered the elevator . the elevator starter to go loud because it was lifting off . they went flying fro the roof . chary said we can see my house . mr wonka said push any button lets go to my house to have dinner mr wonka said ok lets some fun . Mr walker said faster faster now. They landed like qwik as a flash. Charys mum said god you did not go fro the roof , do you want dinner. Yes please. ok thats have dinner . charley hapled hand shaking mr wonka said i have not had a mill in 11 years . and they all live happily all together.

Posted by on September 16th, 2016 at 11:04 am and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (3)

3 Responses to “Ronnie F 100wc”

  1.   Ronnie D Says:

    i do like your simile as quick as a flash, just try to get your spellings correct. + try and use a metaphor!

  2.   jquin Says:

    very good cod in prov it a bit like make more intrestin

  3.   porcha Says:

    good Ronnie

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