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Street scene – Mason

The dim lights got brighter as I moved forward. I cant remember why I walked out of my house in the middle of the night. To be honest, I live in a creepy town because loads of people say we all live on a graveyard. And I believe it because a body’s were found by two three year olds. One of them are still missing.At night, four teenagers said they were attacked by a demonic dog like creature that had torn bat like wings. I walked until I heard a scream and a blood faced baby and that was the last thing I saw…

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One Response to “Street scene – Mason”

  1.   Mrs Boyce @ Team 100WC Says:

    Hi Mason,
    Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story. You did a great job in describing your “creepy” town – I’m glad I don’t live there!

    To improve your writing you might try looking at different ways of starting a sentence. For example try using an “ING” clause….Walking until I heard a scream, I saw a …

    I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
    Cork, Ireland
    Come and visit our Class Blog at http://kidblog.org/MrsBoycesClass-4/

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