How have we used our 100 words this week?

Trinity week 18

On Saturday I asked my mum if I could go out and she said for only half an hour. I quickly got dressed, got my coat on and went to the front door and slammed it behind me. I grabbed my watch from the shed then off I went. Suddenly, I saw a forest so I went in. Half way through I saw a cottage so I carefully and excitedly approached. The door slammed behind me. What was that I could feel? I looked behind me but there was nothing there. I noticed it had been half an hour but I couldn’t get out…..

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One Response to “Trinity week 18”

  1.   Miss Potts (Team 100) Says:

    An excellent effort at this week’s 100 word challenge prompt. You have used some fantastic verbs and adverbs which interest the reader. Try to think more carefully about using different sentence openers next time.

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