How have we used our 100 words this week?
ku

Trinity Week 19

On Friday night, I went outside to go for a walk because it was so hot in the house. When I was out, I saw something so I followed it. It disappeared. I saw it again, but in the forest this time, so I got down and said “Who are you?” it ignored me then disappeared. Frightened, I dragged myself back and said to myself “I’m seeing things I’m sure I am!” but then I slipped down the mud into a ditch. Seeing a piece of paper, I picked it up and saw writing.  I opened it. It said “You are not seeing things…. “

Posted by on January 26th, 2015 at 2:20 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (5)




5 Responses to “Trinity Week 19”

  1.   raccoons Says:

    hi trin, really good but where did you get down

  2.   Ms. Sargent Team 100WC-USA Says:

    Trinity:

    You have begun to capture the mysteriousness of the photo prompt in your writing. Your ending left the reader wanting to learn more. Good job.

    Ms. Sargent
    Team 100 WC-USA

  3.   Mrs DW Team 100 Says:

    Trinity

    Thank you for sharing your story with us, you have a great imagination and I liked the way you linked your thoughts together.

    Try to expand your vocbulary to add to the tension that I nkow you can do.

    Well done. Keep writing.

    Mrs DW

  4.   Chris Osika-Team 100WC Says:

    Trinity,
    Great use of the prompt here. I really wanted to know more! Be sure that when you use dialogue you punctuate correctly.

    …so I got down and asked, “Who are you?”

    Keep up the great work!

  5.   Laura Alonso Says:

    Trinity,
    Brilliant 100WC story. It’s got adventure and mystery and the pace of the action is excellent. You definitely grabbed your reader. WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?!
    Keep up the great work!
    Laura A, Team100, Luxembourg

Leave a Reply