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week 18 elizabeths 100 WC

I was in an epic mine and was just travelling to find the diamonds. Suddenly I as falling down down ,down. Then when I woke up I found myself trapped in a cage. I was terrified ,upset and spooked. I looked down and saw a radio .Unexpectedly, the radio started to play horrifying ghost music ‘ 1, 2 Freddy’s coming for you 3, 4 better lock your door’. I felt wind rushing around me then I turned around to see a shadow. What was that I could feel? I was confused. I turned back around but no one was here…

Posted by on January 19th, 2015 at 2:46 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)




One Response to “week 18 elizabeths 100 WC”

  1.   Barbara McFall (Team 100WC) teacher at Phoenix School, Salem, MA USA Says:

    Hello Elizabeth,
    What a great job you did describing your mine adventure. I especially liked how you wrote about what the person in the mine was feeling. I also thought the radio playing and wind rushing added great mood to your writing.
    I look forward to reading more of your posts.

    Barbara McFall Team 100WC
    The Phoenix School, Salem, MA USA

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