How have we used our 100 words this week?

week 18 Kieran

100 word challenge #week 18
Woke up this morning I could feel something wet It was water my baby sister poured it over me.It was very cold and I had an open cut and it spilt into the cut so it dried up.I had to get out of bed and downstairs to snitch my sister but my mum was already at work so I had to wait until she came home I was waiting ,waiting, for her to come home then she came home I told her but when my mum my sister was not here were is she.

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One Response to “week 18 Kieran”

  1.   Mrs Winter Sharjah English School u.a.e. (Team100WC) Says:

    Hi Kieran, this is an interesting story. I think that if you can, try and keep an eye on punctuation and sentence structure. Some of your sentences are a bit muddled. Great effort Kieran, keep it up 🙂

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