How have we used our 100 words this week?

week 21 kieran

Manchester United was going against chelsea (I hate chelsea) rooney and terry (the two captains) did heads and tails rooney won manchester united are starting “ wayne rooney running down the line volleyed it down van persie and diego costa tackles him from the behind its a penalty for manchester united and a red card for costa” the commentator cried there was silence the silence was deafening then van persie took the penalty and scored. “Hazzard about score but a save by david de gea and kept away by phil jones van persie making a run passes to januzaui and januzaui scores at full time its 2-0.

Posted by on February 9th, 2015 at 2:10 pm and tagged  | Comments & Trackbacks (1)

One Response to “week 21 kieran”

  1.   Mr Addison Says:

    You have though about the action that is happening in your writing and tried to make this interesting for the reader.

    Target: Using capital letters for names e.g. Wayne Rooney

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