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Writing exciting sentences

May20

Temple Run 1

Today in year six we wrote some ‘exciting sentences’ based on the popular app, Temple Run. ‘Writing exciting sentences’ is a book from Alan Peat (@alanpeat) which gives models and examples of amazing sentences.

 

Today we  looked at two sentence types:

When; when; when, then.

and

Tell: show 3 exampes;__.

 

We wrote on tables too (we call them ‘blue boards’) which helped us to explore our ideas and gave us space to think. Have a look at pictures of some of our examples below.

 

Paige & Katie:

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Alfie:

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Erin & Chloe:

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George & Daniel:

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Josh:

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Hayden:

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Summer:

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Mercedes:

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Our class models:

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4 Comments to

“Writing exciting sentences”

  1. May 20th, 2014 at 7:58 pm      Reply Alan Peat Says:

    Great blog and fantastic writing by the pupils. Please pass on my congrats!


  2. May 21st, 2014 at 10:27 pm      Reply PETAA (Primary English Teaching Association Australia) Says:

    Great job, excellent work and we love the blue tables!


  3. May 31st, 2014 at 12:31 pm      Reply Mercedes Paxton Says:

    Miss! Alan peat (that person who wrote the sentences book) comment on the blog! How did he find our bog tho?


    • June 4th, 2014 at 7:16 pm      Reply Mrs T Says:

      Oh, the power of twitter Mercedes! He was really impressed though so well done to you all. Hundreds of other people saw your writing too so we’ll make sure we publish whole bits of writing to the blog soon!
      Mrs T


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