Spy Pen Adverts

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Posted by Mr Addison | Posted in Blog Posts | Posted on 15-12-2015

Two children from Raccoons class went to the radio station to record their persuasive adverts this week. April and Tyler had been working hard to create their adverts and to think about the persuasive language that would be used.

 

Comments (9)

Amazing work

They sound really cool if i had one of those it would be really something.

I like the description for the spy pen if I was a spy it would be ideal for me.Great Work!

Briliant adverts it looks like you have put a lot of time and effort into them. I also love the description

i liked how you have told loads of thing about the pen and described it as well. Great Work

i really like your adverts if they were in the shop id buy them

i really like your spy pen adverts,they were amazing!
we also did adverts in year 4. You could use a green screen to make a proper advert shown on tv if you have the chance.

from samia xxxxx

I love the adverts for the spy pen u have used really creative writing we did something like this at the start of the year and it was fun. 🙂 😮

I love your spy pen adverts I was watching them and they were epic.

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